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Hi! I’m Kathy Ide. In addition to being a published author, I’m a full-time professional freelance editor. For CAN, I’m blogging about tips for writers based on the most common mistakes I see in the manuscripts I edit.

 

DANGLING MODIFIERS

When you start a sentence with a modifying word or phrase, the subject of that sentence is what must be modified by that word or phrase. A “dangling modifier” is a phrase that does not clearly and sensibly modify the appropriate word.

 

EXAMPLE #1: “Changing the oil every 3,000 miles, the Mustang seemed to run better.”

The subject of this sentence is “the Mustang.” The modifying phrase is “Changing the
oil …”

A Mustang cannot change its own oil. So you’d want to rewrite that as something like:

“Changing the oil every 3,000 miles, Sandra found she got much better gas mileage.”

 

EXAMPLE #2: “Slamming on the brakes, the car swerved off the road.”

Unless you’re writing a Stephen King-type novel, the car probably didn’t slam on its own brakes. So:

“Robin slammed on the brakes, and the car swerved off the road.” Or:

“When Robin slammed on the brakes, the car swerved off the road.”

 

EXAMPLE #3: “Six months after attending the writers conference, Gail’s article was accepted by a publisher.”

The subject of this sentence is “Gail’s article.”

“Gail’s article” did not attend the writers conference. So you’d want to rewrite to something like:

“Six months after Gail attended Mount Hermon, her article was accepted by a publisher.”

 

SIMULTANEOUS ACTIONS

Be sure the action in the modifying phrase can be accomplished at the same time as the action in the rest of the sentence.

EXAMPLE: “Hugging the postman, Delilah ripped open the box containing her new novel.”

Delilah cannot simultaneously hug the postman and rip open a box. Reword to something like:

“After hugging the postman, Delilah ripped open the box containing her new novel.”

 

MISPLACED MODIFIERS

The position of a modifier determines what thing or action is being modified.

EXAMPLE #1: “Sharon sent out a proposal for her book on living with horses last week.”

Sharon’s proposal wasn’t for a book about “living with horses last week.” Reword:

“Last week Sharon sent out a proposal for her book on living with horses.”

 

EXAMPLE #2: “The editor told me on Thursday I have a book signing.”

Did the editor say this on Thursday, or do you have a book signing on Thursday?

“On Thursday, the editor told me I have a book signing.” Or:

“The editor told me I have a book signing on Thursday.”

 

If you’re interested in working with a freelance editor (or know someone who is), e-mail me through the contact page of my website. Or go to the Christian Editor Connection to get referrals to other established, professional editorial freelancers. If you’re a freelance editor yourself, or think you might be interested in that field, check out The Christian PEN: Proofreaders and Editors Network.

ProofreadingSecretsAnd when you’re ready to proofread your manuscript, consider getting a copy of my book Proofreading Secrets of Best-Selling Authors. It reveals how multi-published authors proofread their manuscripts to avoid typos, inconsistencies, inaccuracies, and errors in punctuation, usage, grammar, and spelling.

 

 

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About Kathy Ide

Kathy Ide, author of Proofreading Secrets of Best-Selling Authors, has written books, articles, short stories, devotionals, play scripts, and Sunday school curriculum. She has ghostwritten ten nonfiction books and a five-book novel series. Kathy is a full-time freelance editor/proofreader/mentor for new writers, established authors, and book publishers. She speaks at writers’ conferences across the country. Kathy is the founder and director of The Christian PEN: Proofreaders and Editors Network (www.TheChristianPEN.com) and the Christian Editor Connection (www.ChristianEditor.com). For more about Kathy, visit www.KathyIde.com or find her on Facebook, Twitter, Google+, LinkedIn, or Pinterest.

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